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I was inspired by Bible, Tolkien `s description and its movie counterparts and true love...
Lilies
A River was flowing in silence in a walleye where the battle will be. I see Lilies in field and green grass, Dancing with wind… Sun is giving them smile - they shine! …I see them in mire but just for a moment, there the glorious horse will stand and just one voice will tear the air…! But Lilies are teasing my soul now! Awakes the thoughts which are fading, Images and scents of life, laugh and the one I love, for whom I breathe… …Trumpets and red sky! Fingers are slipping over the flowers, Knight knelt down and talked to Lilies… No one heard him but true heart knows his words! Oh true heart! Do you hear that words? “Beloved one, I am going here to die, Where my rest shall be sweet, here where are Lilies. I am going my dear because of Justice and Truth which are fading in this world, For the cry of innocent and sorrow of souls, o my love… I know, that battle would not be seen with eyes but harder it is from anything under this sky! I go now, beloved one, and save one tear for me, but of joy not of sorrow! Because your Knight has raised his sword for light! For new day, for new tomorrow! And so I go to die here on this field of life and death and Lilies, and if it is a wish of the Good Lord , I will see you again my love.” I saw Quiet River and green walleye and warriors of light how they ride glorious steeds! And I saw the army of night … O how it is black! It has surrounded the righteous camp. The horse screamed and warrior's sword blazed in the air! Hey! Hey! Hey! Ground is shaking and earth wipes, wipes, wipes… Hey! Hey! Fiery blaze and anger are there in the knight's friends eyes! Hey! The horse jumped and a hundred fell beneath him, Hey! …everywhere is dust and wind! Hey! Sword is high! Hey! And heads of the army of night are falling down, left and right … the road is in making through the bodies, from the hands of warriors of light! And high in the air the ears have heard this song: “My brothers, don't stop now- Hey! “ Sings the knight on glorious horse… “No matter if they are countless in this judgment day!” “For truth- all! Let love prevail! Roaring- Hey! For righteous God, my brothers –now! Let the world of evil brake down!” Hey! I saw the walleye quiet and peaceful where the final battle was. The grass lay down and there are no more flowers… Vultures are flying over the bodies… But there where the horse rider has stopped, and a moment before a battle has talked, there stands a flower alone above the breath of death. It's been teased by the breeze and golden Sun. The warriors are gone and their horses too. There are no evil now, just shadow and a smoke of doom. But that Lillie is the only witness to beloved woman, he keeps the words of her knight, of her man. From the wind that crashed all, the Good God kept it because of that love. And she takes it from the ground , one tear felled from her eye, that the eternal love may live inside her which was kept for her knight. In the moment when she was loosing herself inside squeezing the flower on her sore breasts, the light shined through the fog on her! And there were the figures of them! Faster and faster of that glorious heroes who were fighting for love , and her knight how he rides toward her! And just when she taught that it's just an illusion of her pain, something has turned her gaze to sky ,to light! And there she saw with her eyes, one smile in her sunset, because all the lives of that heroes, who died for justice and truth, Good God does not forget, And I saw again the field and golden walleye. and green grass and still waters… and smile of God who gave it all! and her and him and Lilies, bounded with everlasting love. |
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![]() hey hey hey nicee read beren Im a sucker for poems too --- for whom do you bloom
lily white for whom do you put on perfume blushing in fields of form and fragrance engaging dawn in a dream of bridal dance whom do you love lily white there behind my lover's ear |
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It is easy to say rhyme and verse, and beautiful song lights sparkle in the eye! But to paint gentle words of the heart and sing about love-gift is from the sky... |
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Gorgeous!! What a lovely poem...
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![]() I want to fly across open skies
be here or be there , wherever I so please need to feel joy after endless tries through dawns and dusks whom I always tease... ...whom I always tease to see what will happen underneath every tree when rains and mists bring life and flowers take it and readily spring out! I want to see glorious waterfalls on the river that is small and golden apples on the silver tree beautiful colors of the rainbow over the land where my soul is free... |
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Beren -
I like your poem. I also have a soft spot for mythic myths, like RedeZra. I write poetry too, but you both probably wouldn't like it, because I swear a lot. After I read 'lillies' the first time, I turned around and watched this. (Back to the lord of the rings theme.... of your first poem....YouTube - LOTR Give up the Halfling, She-Elf! ) thank you for sharing it |
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If you want him ,come and claim him! ![]() And then the watery horses came and rest is history... ![]() |
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![]() Three things a man should do in life three to be a man, To write a book plant a tree have child three things a man should do, but if you can`t make it all just one will be enough too! And to love his woman as him self... ![]() |
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Thank you Beren..
absolutly magnificent... i have not written poetry in a long time... but i do love quotes... Die when I may, I want it said by those who knew me best that I always plucked a thistle and planted a flower where I thought a flower would grow. Abraham Lincoln |
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Read the initial poem,whom ever you may be that comes now into this page and in this time frame.
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Lily
Her petals reach out to me like a hand across time Her scent fills my nostrils with memories of you So easily she blooms revealing herself to all Thank You Your beauty feeds us. *improv poem inspired by berens thoughful post* thank you beren dear |
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Your name Celine , is radiating in some subtle energy.
![]() For whom all flowers bloom?
Is it not for eyes of the beholder? For whom they carry scent of divine? four my heart and thine... For whom little lily opens its chest, when dawn brings in champagne of moist? It takes a minute ,maybe a day... and whole eternity to be carried away! Into heavenly realms, our Father`s playgrounds... To grasp the beauty of one flower , created for us and all others... |
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Beautiful poem Beren
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![]() Darkness creeps in,
wearing a cloak of love ,dawn and green. Hearts are troubled `cause they feel, an unknown menace that is real. Cast a light! Lead the fight! Love them `till they die! For there is a force they can`t bear, and a power that is THE scare! Love- that beacon of life. |
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*smiles*
Beautiful |
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