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Old 09-14-2008, 03:00 AM   #9
JohnWdoe
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Default Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers

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Originally Posted by TranceAm View Post
The person in the mirror
Never manages to smile for a longer time.

Whatever you do, whatever you try
When the non conscious comes back in..
Bye bye goes your facial smile.

That ray of pure sunshine.
That touches every mind.
Love on a display.
As best of the gentle side can be.
For everyone that wants it is there to see...

And the ones not smiling thinking..
Curses.. but I do see...

There is... still hope for me.
Someday love will touch my heart.
I will be the happy one...
For everyone to see..

There is a person... that smiles as a mirror.
The man handed the key to love..
Did he tell you the secret?
or he was he in vain when he tried.

Love the ending and the message!! very good! i love the introspection aspect and the question at the end it really ties the message together.

If anyone else wants to share a poem don't be shy we all can appreciate a persons work.

Hope you all are doing great!

Peace my friends!
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